a fear
losing my sense of direction
in a world where
not all signposts
point toward
dreams
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if we didn't, where would we be?
losing my sense of direction
in a world where
not all signposts
point toward
dreams
Category: rwp | Tags: 3:30, rwp 8 comments »
April 3rd, 2010 at 1:16 pm
Hi, lunchontuesday. I like very short poems, and I like “a fear” for it’s wry wisdom. I’ll be back. And I invite you to discover my work on the NaPoWriMo 2010 page at http://www.gregoconnell.com =)
April 4th, 2010 at 12:11 pm
Thank you for the kind words, Greg! Your poetry and literacy projects look very inspiring – and I particularly enjoyed your Day 4 NaPo Ted Hughes poem.
April 4th, 2010 at 6:53 am
Oh wonderful. Coming from a person who always gets lost, I can say that you’ve captured two great fears and twisted them into a tight band.
April 4th, 2010 at 1:04 pm
Thank you so much! I’ve enjoyed discovering your site as well – good luck with NaPo!
April 5th, 2010 at 1:18 am
I really like what you did here.
Pamela
April 5th, 2010 at 2:48 pm
I love this — that’s a fear of mine, too.
not understanding the signs.
your blog is lovely.
April 5th, 2010 at 6:56 pm
Thank you so much – I’m really enjoying your site as well. (I really like what you do with space and punctuation!)
April 5th, 2010 at 11:52 pm
nicely done…and very true…